Monday, January 29, 2007

SEGREGATION OF LIFE (poem)






Inefficient senses
Worsening luck
Burgeoning workload
Distrustful time

Contented self
Foul-weather friends
Grain of hope
Life withn life

3 comments:

gan said...

hi man so u also got ur web page cool man so ut ur all poems here man and let world came to know abut it ok ... keep good work going ok

Unknown said...

Knowing that u have got the web page.... there was no patience for me to see to it at earliest..... there has been so much pain and feeling into it.. that it makes the reader to think as if its happenning in front of his eyes...
About peom Segregation of life just mind blowing....
That has proved once again praneeth is master of peom and very good upcoming novelist,....
HATS OFF TO YOU MY DEAR....
LOTS MORE TO COME..... ITS JUST A BEGINNING OF THE NEW BEGINNING.....

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